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Music Girl

Let the music rescue you;
Flight for life when you’re feeling blue.
On the dark side of the rainbow,
Black’s the only hue.

Take a supernatural starship
To the heavens up above.
Through a lipstick sunset
With the person that you love.

Your music is what carries you
To another place in time;
No one seems to understand,
It’s the lyrics not the rhyme.

Share with me your loneliness,
I’ll help you if I can.
If only I were there with you.
I’d be your Music Man.

– Tom Wilcox   09/29/96
©2005-2009 `TomWilcox
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I wrote this in 1996 for a friend that used music as an escape from her problems. A companion piece to "You're My Music Girl" [link]
Thanks to " my-stock " [link] for her sheet music image.

Tom
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i really like it! awesome rhyming and imagery and everything.
my favorite lines:
"On the dark side of the rainbow,
Black’s the only hue"
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Tha's so sweet! The rhymes are very charming. :D
I really like this, great use of language and imagery. Tis a fav :)
Thanks McKenna and especially for your feedback. :-)

Tom

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wow, this gave a great insight of visual refrences, it is a well composed poem, with a nice ryhming scheme to it, my favorite line is definetly "i'd be your music man" wow what an ending, great poem Tom. Nice one.

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Thank you very much. And for the Fav! :-)

tom

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:-) Thanks

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Thank you very much my friend. Yeah, that's my favorite line in the poem as well. Thanks for saying that!

Thanks too for featuring me on your homepage too. :hug:

Tom

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Thanks! :-)

Tom

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no problem, anything to let an artist of your persona shown to the community.

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"El Arte se hico para uno expressar, hasta el corazon de uno este feliz"

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~TheExquisiteCorpse
°DRAWSKILL - Biggest LUNA Fan & IRA fan

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